Holiday email texte

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Hello honorable experts.

What is opinion of holiday email is better?

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Hello
Wish you cheerful Christmas and a terrific New Year ahead!

Thank you for cooperation with us this year. Dear, we work that next year could be much better for your company.
We believe in that this Christmas brings you all the joy and happiness that you deserve and that the New Year rings in with positive thoughts and vibes.

BTW
Our office will be closed from xxx to xxx, 2017. For any problems that you may have regarding your service during these days, you can contact us.

Merry Christmas and happy New Year once again!

Yours sincerely

2.
Hello
Wish you cheerful Christmas and a terrific New Year ahead!

Thank you for cooperation with us this year. This is good experience.
We are starting to implement an more improvements in our extensions, services and development process. You will have more control, more comfortable and more optimal solutions. We therefore believe in that next year could be much better for your company.

Now, though, is holiday!
We hope in that this Christmas and New Year brings you all the joy, positive thoughts and happiness.

BTW
Our office will be closed from xxx to xxx, 2017. For any problems that you may have regarding your service during these days, you can contact us.

Merry Christmas and happy New Year once again!


3.
Hello
Wish you cheerful Christmas and a terrific New Year ahead!

Thank you for cooperation with us this year. This is good experience.
We are improving our extensions, services and development process already. We therefore believe in that our cooperation on the next year could be much better for you.

Now, though, is holiday!
We hope in that this Christmas and New Year brings you all the joy, positive thoughts and happiness.

BTW
Our office will be closed from xxx to xxx, 2017. For any problems that you may have regarding your service during these days, you can contact us.

Merry Christmas and happy New Year once again!
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  • Sentiment good - too text heavy.

    just give bullet points of main message.

    1.when you close
    2. reopening date

    etc, etc.
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