Please help: I am trying to come up with a good headline
I am working on a headline and I want it to be simple, direct and invoke benefit to my prospects.
I provide Manage IT Services to small business and many times I find it very difficult to create a good message capture prospect's attention. Here is what I have.
1. "Keep All Systems Running at Full Speed"
2. "Become More Profitable with Better Technology"
3. "Better Technology, Less Downtime, Keep More of Your Profit"
I particularly prefer number 3 but would like your input on making it better or on any of the other two.
Your help would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you in advance.
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