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Hello All

I am just starting to do meetings in Toronto. Do a two fold event. First is to have a networking event for real estate investors. Second is to help the Haitian people out. I am sending this out using my Database Autoresponder system to those that are in my database for Constant Contact.
The following is how my message reads. Does anyone have any suggestions on how to make sure I get maximum registations?

Thank you all in Advance

Brett

Upcoming Events

Before moving to Toronto, I had been conducting Business Networking Breakfast meetings and Identity Theft Protection workshops. My commitment to those are now coming to an end except for a few workshops at various libraries across Toronto.

With that being said I have created The North American Real Estate Connections Organization. It is designed and focused on bridging my two passions together - business and real estate. And REAL ESTATE is a BIG BUSINESS...

We are having our first meeting on Thursday February 18, 2010. I am looking forward to seeing you all there. You will be able to get a lot of great content to grow your business, and the most important thing is that you will be able to meet others there. I want you to be able to connect with people here in a safe environment.

The meetings are smaller compared to others. This is so that you can really get to know the people there. It is really about building an environment that is focused on Real Relationships to build WEALTH Through Real Estate.

Come and join us ...

This event is a two-fold event. Not only will you be there building relationships, but when you register, you will be also be supporting and helping the relief efforts in Haiti.

This past month we have been seeing that Haiti is having a Heck of a time. Despite everything that you may have heard about Haiti, I want you to forget about all of those bad things about the country. That's right - just forget about it. My belief is that maybe all the bad that has gone on in the past is about to change. And we can all be a part of Haiti coming together to make that change. That is why when you come out to our event on Febuary 18, 2010, we will be giving part of the $79 fee to help rebuild their communities. Come and Network, Build Relationships, Discover more about investing in Real Estate, and let's make a difference in the lives of the Haitian people.


Take Action now to Register. Click onto the link below to reserve you seat.
PAY PAL LINK HERE.

Preregisteration up until Feb. 15,2010 at $79. Remember 25% goes toward helping people in Haiti. Click now to get your seat.

After Febuary 15 or at the door it will be $109. So book early at $79. Actions takers becomes successful by taking Action. _Pay Pal Link Here

NAREConnections Orgination Networking Event
Location 1101 Bay St.
Party Room
Date: February 18, 2010
Time: 7pm till 10pm
Preregisteration PAY PAL LINK


If you have an interesting story idea or are already having success with investing in real estate and would like to be featured,, we want to know your story ...

If you have any questions about real estate investing then I want you to ask me your questions. If I don't know what the answer is then I will ask one of experts that are part of my team who knows.


Successfully,

Brett Deguire
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  • Profile picture of the author jukeboxhero
    Waaaaaay to wordy. The purpose of an auto responder message is NOT to sell anything but a click...

    How about something like this...

    Brett here,

    Wanna come rub shoulders with hundreds of investors just like you?

    Click here to find out more
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    If Copywriting Legends Like John Carlton, Gary Halbert and Even Franky Kern Recommend

    >>>> This <<<<

    Shouldn't You Pay Attention
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    • Profile picture of the author 5Tool
      Brett- Jukeboxhero has it right. They need to know RIGHT AWAY why they should bother take time out of their busy schedules to attend.

      Are valuable (even exclusive) tips going to be shared? Investors always want information that will profit them.

      Will business deals be made at the meeting? Or is it more of a social gathering?

      Whatever the big benefit, hit them over the head with it so it's clear.

      i.e. a news headline: New Real Estate Networking Group Is Set To Make It's Members Wealthy While Helping the Less Fortunate...Cone See What the Buzz Is All About...
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