Please review my first Ebook

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Hello I would love for a few people to review my first ebook. Please give your honest review, good or bad, if there should be more or less etc. Thank you.

Ok I removed it, will upload the 2nd edition for review! Thank you all so much for the kind words and the help you gave us! If I ask for help or a review I would never ever get upset for anyone given their honest opinion! Thanks a million!
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  • Looked good to me and I'm not that big into smoothies. The problem I would foresee though is the fact that people can get so much free info regarding smoothie recipes etc so many may be of the mind of 'why pay for recipes?'.

    I've not looked into the market or anything but as a general browser that was the first thing that popped into my mind. But I'm sure it would sell ok.
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    • Good thinking, I didn't think about that as well, I will have to add more to it to make it worth anything. Thank you so much for your feed back.
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  • I know nothing about juicing. But I know a few things about ebooks.
    1) centering is really difficult to read
    2) ad in the beginning of the ebook makes it look less valuable
    3) though, not necessary I prefer to use serif font(Times new roman, Palatino linotype). I've learned that it's easier to read.
    4) there is no table of contents. I usually don't read a book unless I can read a table of contents. So, I couldn't read your ebook.
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  • Thanks all, I take criticisms as a learning tool, Thank you all so much I have learned so much from you all so far! I'll get back to work on it!
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    • It's totally OK to make a few mistakes at first.
      You are brave enough to make the book and to show it to us, it means that you will succeed. A couple more "editions" and you're ready for the liftoff
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  • All good, useful points so far.

    You could break up the body with appropriate headlines - and also set off the recipe titles in bold face and maybe italics for the ingredient lists. It would probably help if you indented the recipes, but I'm almost certain you'd have to use tables for that - but if so, experiment with having two columns of recipes well spaced left-to-right.
    Not sure about the asterisks - I think I'd delete them.
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  • Again thanks for all input if there is more ILL Take all you can give! I love this...
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    • Hi Tom,

      Allow me to add my .02.

      I'm wondering if you plan to sell this e-book, give it as a bonus, or give it in exchange for an e-mail address?

      The content in my opinion is fine but I think you should focus more on the benefits of juicing in the beginning instead of going so in depth about its history.

      I also agree with using sub headlines, images, and videos. The PDF format allows you to add different elements quickly and easily. Take advantage of that.

      I know its niche dependent but adding formatting, color, images, video etc. can really set you apart from other marketers and command a higher price.

      Kevin

      P.S. PM me and I'll send you a copy of a report I did.
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  • Also where would one go to get videos? I don't think I can just grab any videos off youtube without it be consider stealing right?

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    Hello I would love for a few people to review my first ebook. Please give your honest review, good or bad, if there should be more or less etc. Thank you. Ok I removed it, will upload the 2nd edition for review! Thank you all so much for the kind words and the help you gave us! If I ask for help or a review I would never ever get upset for anyone given their honest opinion! Thanks a million!