Testing Squeeze page ???

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Hey Guys I'm testing one of many different squeeze pages but I need different opinions from other people ..

Please Let me know what you think, Its still in the works but as of right now I will love to hear some great ideas from different people

Here You Go: How 20 Year Old Turn 40 into a Clothing Line Business
#page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author surffab
    split testing would be an option, create 2 similar squeeze pages, just change the headline or background and see which one is converting better... then create another one and compare it to the better converting one to see if the new one is better...
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  • Profile picture of the author CynthiaNataline
    Using transparent opt-in box with landscape background is like trending now, but in some cases, a simpler squeeze page with less details can converts better. It doesn't always like that, but you might want to test things out. Cheers!

    eL
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  • Profile picture of the author thedanbrown
    I would change the color of the button, and split test the rest.

    Also, the page took a while to load on my computer and that could be a big problem if it happens often because people lose their patience quick and will click off if it takes a little while to load
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    • Profile picture of the author VinnyBock
      I think the look is nice but its kind of hard to understand what you're offering...
      The page title is "How 20 Year Old Turn 40 into a Clothing Line Business" :confused:

      If its a 20 year old money making system that still works today, and that's your pitch approach, the whole page needs rewording...

      Just some of the other wording errors are...
      "With the same system he use" should be I use, or he used/uses...
      Also, you can't mold someone into a system, you can show them a system, or mold them into a money maker, but it doesn't make sense the way you have it worded...

      I also experienced really slow load time as Dan mentioned...

      You should consider hiring someone to write the page for you, being its such a small amount of content it won't cost much, but it can greatly improve the productivity of the page...

      The best way to learn if the page is effective would be to test, test, and test again...

      Good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author Sarevok
    I like the style of the squeeze.

    But I agree it takes too long to load!

    People are dreadfully impatient.

    Also.

    The headline seems a little off.

    Like someone else mentioned.. I'm not sure what it is?

    Be more clear as to what you're offering.

    PS: This is just my opinion. You won't know how good it does until you drive traffic or otherwise get people to see it

    Hope this helps.

    PPS: Test your load time on gtmetrix.com
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