The Art of $uccessful Direct Mail

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As you know by now, direct mail is quickly becoming a major
weapon in an offline marketers war-chest.

Unfortunately many offliners screw up how to use it

When I write a mail piece I start first with who I am sending it
to. Is it a small business owner, head honcho at a corporate
powerhouse... or am I sending a paper airplane to a hobo
under a bridge.

Know the 'who' or the letter will be poo

I often get to see letters that some offliners on here send out, and
to say they are mind-numbingly bad is an understatement.

There are several key components to successful mail and here
they are:
  • Written to the right prospect using the right wording
  • Not written in big-ass blocks of text
  • A great opening paragraph
  • what it is mailed in
What do most on here screw up? ALL OF IT!

Word-up

Let's take SEO services. I do not like to use that wording when
I try to sell that service. Too many don't really understand it, or
they have been burned by another guy promising the moon, just
like you are. I like to sell 'systems'. Name your system and then
explain what it will do for them.

Holy sh-t, you want me to read that?

I have seen letters that are literally a full page of text with no
breaks. No paragraph spacing leads to the trash can. It is
very hard to read large groupings of text.

The chance of the recipient reading your word assault are about
as good as him manscaping with a lighter.

Don't be afraid to add some graphic elements, as long as it is
relative and/or keeps it interesting.

"Wife beats husband to death with cat"

That is an attention grabber, eh? Use caution on what you put
at the top of your piece. Whether it be a headline or the first
sentence, don't sell them on reading with something abstract.

Create a headline/first sentence that will grab their hand and
go tumbling down the hill, like Jack and Jill. Bring them into
it as much as possible by adding 'you', 'your', 'you're' through
the whole piece.

You're trying to make there life easier, healthier, more successful
or whatever. What you sell is not what's important, what it does for
them is everything.

Death of a salesman

Here is the kicker, even if you do all the above right you can still
not get one word read.

Let's say you are selling your services door to door. You walk
into a business with a big sign around your neck that says-

"I want your money"

Your envelope is vital to your success. You do not want to announce
who you are. A return address is fine, but no name. Use off-white
or colored envelopes. Use stamps other than generic postage (I like
to put the stamps on a tad crooked).

You can hand write the address, but it is not as important as many
tend to believe.

Just these simple factors alone can fatten your wallet. Using the
exact same formula as above we sold $98,000 in services and
we mailed 80 letters.

Keep your letter easy to read, simple, involving (by using 'you'),
reveal how you can make their life better and you will have more
success.

Go get some

Paul
#copywriting #direct mail #offline #paul mcquillan marketing
  • Profile picture of the author BrandonMHowe
    You wrote a nice post here, Irish.

    Thank you!

    You're absolutely right about big-ass blocks of text! I ignore anything
    that isn't aesthetically pleasing and a big blob of words is about as
    attractive as Larry the Cable Guy in a speedo.

    Going along with the bit about 'who' you're writing to... You need to
    know exactly 'why' that person would buy now and touch on those
    specific pain points, or greed, or whatever.

    KNOW YOUR TARGET MARKET, for sure!
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    • Profile picture of the author Irish Intuition
      Originally Posted by BrandonMHowe View Post

      You wrote a nice post here, Irish.

      Thank you!

      Going along with the bit about 'who' you're writing to... You need to
      know exactly 'why' that person would buy now and touch on those
      specific pain points, or greed, or whatever.

      KNOW YOUR TARGET MARKET, for sure!
      There is no question that the biggest problem offliners are
      having is knowing the REAL reasons business owners
      hire them... it is not that hard if they pay attention.

      Listen to the marketplace.... they love to inform!
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  • Profile picture of the author Biz Max
    I have been using direct mail in my businesses for more than 12 years.

    It is working better now for me than it did 5 years ago.

    good post


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    • Profile picture of the author Irish Intuition
      Originally Posted by OfflineGold View Post

      I have been using direct mail in my businesses for more than 12 years.

      It is working better now for me than it did 5 years ago.

      good post
      Direct mail is better to do now than in the last 10 years. Not
      just with letters but with postcards as well. In the US the
      EDDM service is incredible.

      As long as we target who we are sending the piece to, it
      can have a good to phenomenal ROI.
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      • Profile picture of the author Biz Max
        Good thing I re-read this thread. There was a couple key points I left out of a mailing I'm preparing. Ugh :rolleyes:
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  • Profile picture of the author Aivaras
    You've just gave us really great tips for direct mailing. Thank you.
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  • Profile picture of the author EagleTeamVentures
    I agree that direct mail is an essential tool but the cost I found is very prohibitive to being able to effectively utilize this tool.
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  • Profile picture of the author aharrold
    Depending how targeted your list is and if the letter is custom tailored to the prospect, I would HIGHLY suggest investing in tracking and signature for each letter. That Sam guy had the lumpy thread, but using objects in mailers has been around forever -not to take away from his great post- and is highly effective- in-conjunction with tracking & signature.
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