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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th November 2012, 01:59 PM
Replies: 4
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Posted By professorrosado
Re: Offer/sale at the end of eBook or not?

I always include some sales offer in everything I write for online consumption. With 33 pages of good content, you should not feel bad about adding 1 page of a sales offer and a few links here and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th November 2012, 01:50 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 404
Posted By Glen Andrews
Re: Offer/sale at the end of eBook or not?

Hey John, the best way to offer your products without an all-out sales pitch is to incorporate the product throughout the e-book using stories.

Tell a few stories about clients that got great...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th September 2012, 02:50 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 489
Posted By jbsmith
Re: Bundling DVD and Book

Suggest either Vervante or disk.com - I have used both some time back for fulfillment of manuals + CD/DVD

Jeff
Forum: Copywriting 24th September 2012, 04:41 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 698
Posted By Robert_Rand
Re: Critique my sales page and I'll update conversion rates

I think it's solid; nice job. It speaks credibility. The biggest thing I see in the writing is it's missing the feel of excitement, the emotional appeal. Consider how you can incorporate more...
Forum: Copywriting 24th September 2012, 04:01 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 698
Posted By ChapirO
Re: Critique my sales page and I'll update conversion rates

Hey johnhowle,

3.3% sounds good man, but sure it might be able to go even higher. But imagine if you had 20 or so page ´s with that conversion!

Lately i've been writing mostly in other...
Forum: Copywriting 24th September 2012, 10:52 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 698
Posted By Raydal
Re: Critique my sales page and I'll update conversion rates

First, you need to realize that 3.3% for this letter is great. I guess
that your traffic is really targeted and warm because it can be
improved in many ways.

1. The vertical spacing for the...
Forum: Copywriting 24th September 2012, 09:53 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 698
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: Critique my sales page and I'll update conversion rates

Hi John,

Here's some quick ideas for you:

Shorten your headline, make it easy to read at a glance.

Make it clearer what problem getting stronger solves.

Make the subheads stand out more...
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