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Need critical feedback regarding my site.

by UnlocksMyI
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Hello Warriors.

I need some critical feedback regarding my website that I have created. From the design to the content and the feeling of the website if possible.

I need some honest critics out here!

Does it catch your eye (if you were interested)?
Does it look like the type of website that you would actually make the second click and continue to look at.
That sort of stuff.

The URL is UnlocksMyI.com - Your Offical iPhone Factory Unlocking Carrier!

Thank you.
#critical #feedback #site
  • Profile picture of the author RobinInTexas
    Overall the site looks OK, I'm not sure you need the "paypal verified" box to be as prominent as you have it.

    I had to look for the order now link, I think it should be more prominent.

    I would style the "iPhone Factory Unlocks" box with a stylized <ul> using image bullets or checkmarks or stars or something instead of plain vanilla html

    The order page is way to complicated, I think there are too many options, you might use a "preorder" page where the customer picks the country or region first instead of beaing faced with so many choices on one page.
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    ...Even if you're on the right track, you'll get run over if you just set there.
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    • Profile picture of the author UnlocksMyI
      Thank you for the feedback.

      I will look to spice it up in all departments from design to content.
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  • Profile picture of the author samntly
    I would also include:
    1) move the paypal verified somewhere else and if possible find the image which says paypal verified as opposed to the text. I'm sure there's an emblem or something available on the net somewhere.
    2) there is a lot of text within that large black box
    I would rewrite it like this:

    Tired Of Not Being Able To Use Your Iphone With .....(enter your text here).....
    Then try our service. We offer:
    (green check mark) - Our method is simple and user friendly
    (green check mark) - 100% Guaranteed to work with any iphone
    (green check mark) - We offer the best prices & match any price
    (green check mark) - 100% money back guarantee

    Those check marks with these should really clinch it. That title is a bit more emotional since it deals with their frustration about not being able to use their iphone with etx etx.

    Good luck and let us know how it goes.
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