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Forum: Copywriting 24th January 2013, 10:50 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 617
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Suggestions for my Site?

There's certainly no need to provoke your audience to anger in this situation. They'd be dealing enough with that on their own! You're not looking for ANGER. You're looking for EMPATHY.

It's more...
Forum: Copywriting 24th January 2013, 01:56 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 617
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Suggestions for my Site?

Well, for starters, nothing really catches my eye about it right away. And I didn't even realize most of your sales copy wasn't visible until you scroll down a bit. Things like the benefits don't...
Forum: Copywriting 15th January 2013, 04:09 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,061
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Review of Finance related landing page on very popular news site

Also, your pop-up on leaving the page is too generic as well. Instead of claiming "massive impact" for them, define what that really means in high value numbers or percentages.
Forum: Copywriting 15th January 2013, 04:08 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,061
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Review of Finance related landing page on very popular news site

Initially, I think it remains too bland and vague in what it's actually offering. What cold, hard profit value does your service offer? My eyes are quickly drawn to the $495 and $59 price...
Forum: Copywriting 9th January 2013, 09:23 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 674
Posted By JRVogt
Direct marketing at its finest...

Can't get much more direct than this.

https://i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/6943588864/h2B52BDDC/

Feeling snacky now, for some reason.
Forum: Copywriting 1st January 2013, 10:39 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 744
Posted By JRVogt
Post Intriguing article(s) on 2013 marketing trends and content channels

Ran across this first article, and thought it of interest to those looking for marketing channels to apply their copy skills to:

10 Trends to Define 2013 in Marketing- #9 Direct Mail Survives, but...
Forum: Copywriting 1st December 2012, 12:35 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,077
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Before You Write Copy for the Williams-Sonoma No Spill Gravy Separator, Read This

Priceless! If you'll excuse me, I'm going to go dim the lights for my next project...
Forum: Copywriting 1st December 2012, 09:55 AM
Replies: 144
Views: 7,412
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Copywriting Contest

Thanks for the transparency, Jeremey. Looks like you're taking all the right steps. Funny thing...I too am trying to get a coaching sessions with a high performer from the forums...wonder if it's the...
Forum: Copywriting 29th November 2012, 08:44 AM
Replies: 144
Views: 7,412
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Copywriting Contest

I think we're pretty much free to determine all that on our own. Kinda fun that way.
Forum: Copywriting 29th November 2012, 08:40 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 930
Posted By JRVogt
Re: My Do-It-Yourself Secrect Copywriting System [Secret Rules]

In your 2nd rule...there is a word you start using in place of "coke." I do not think it means what you think it means.

3rd Rule: If you approach with the mentality that customers are stupid,...
Forum: Copywriting 27th November 2012, 09:59 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 798
Posted By JRVogt
Re: The idea that hit me like a big...two ton..heavy thing...

I think many would welcome that sort of course. You hear a lot about "Get swipe files! Always add to your swipe file collection!" but not hardly as much about what then to do with all that content....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th November 2012, 09:57 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 4,445
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Pets Niche and sub niches

Okay, I know this may come off negatively. Apologies, upfront. But I started typing down a dozen bullet points with subpoints on niches and micro-niches within this market off the top of my head....
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2012, 08:02 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,514
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Well, it's a legitimate source of calorie burning, right? I'm sure someone out there has a program built around that concept...
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2012, 04:15 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,400
Posted By JRVogt
Re: What skills should a copywriter have?

Here's the link to a sticky atop the Copywriting Forum here:

Top Copywriting Books...Ever (http://www.warriorforum.com/copywriting-forum/52476-top-copywriting-books-ever.html)

Should give you...
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2012, 08:58 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,400
Posted By JRVogt
Re: What skills should a copywriter have?

The skills you learn on top of the actual writing are going to depend on the types of products you want to offer clients that incorporate your copy...plus how much personal control you want to...
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2012, 08:53 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 553
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Yeah, but can you dance to it?

When I'm getting all the basic ideas onto the page, I'm not necessarily as aware of any rhythm right then, though I tend to listen to high-energy music to keep the fingers typing as fast as possible....
Forum: Copywriting 25th November 2012, 08:16 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,414
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Live Face on Web -- a cool way to present sales copy? Or just creepy?

Haven't employed this sort of tactic before. It's interesting, certainly snags your attention, and if done in a professional and engaging manner, might be useful.

However, even while I recognize...
Forum: Copywriting 24th November 2012, 11:48 PM
Replies: 144
Views: 7,412
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Copywriting Contest

Sounds like fun. Always looking for ways to stretch the creative muscles.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 10:05 PM
Replies: 109
Views: 6,489
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Top 10 list of overused words for 2012

Intentional or intentionality.

Also..."community." Building it, most times.

And, of course...intentionally building community...or building an intentional community...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 09:19 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 598
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Where can I find a personal and inexpensive copywriter?

When you say "I'm not implying..."

Er...pretty much. Yes, you are. You want personal service that actually makes a difference? Good quality copy?

Not anywhere near that price range. What you...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 09:12 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,514
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Hey 7day. To follow-up, here's my take on your video-focused theme page.

There are a couple big issues that are going to keep it from performing well.

First, your messaging is off. Making...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 08:54 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,514
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

The overall layout works fine. Easy visual appeal and all, but instead of seeing a "holy cow, gotta learn more about this" hook or title of any sort, my eye is immediately drawn to $47 for Lifetime...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2012, 12:01 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,026
Posted By JRVogt
Re: My copywriting research strategy

Google is the easiest way, for sure. Sometimes googling a question like "How do I break through a weight loss plateau" or a statement like "I need a diet that actually works!" can lead you to forums...
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2012, 02:11 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,026
Posted By JRVogt
Re: My copywriting research strategy

Good tactic. Forums that address those specific issues or products are another great place to browse about. People can reveal lots of personal struggles and desires in those places.
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