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Forum: Copywriting

24th May 2015, 10:22 AM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By Enfusia

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

I've been training for decades and know the industry.

I'm going to contradict much of what's been said here.

Having a pic of Branch Warren with a large weight does impress. Branch is short but...

Forum: Copywriting

24th May 2015, 03:41 AM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By Tim R

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Like with the whole site. It's virtually unreadable.

People lie about this stuff all the time. The market is skeptical. Your site does nothing to address that skepticism.

The fact that you...

Forum: Copywriting

23rd May 2015, 01:14 PM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By angiecolee

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

I'm happy to help - it's super critical to UNDERSTAND the changes you're making, otherwise you're going to be on the never-ending hamster wheel of frustration, constantly wondering why what you're...

Forum: Email Marketing

22nd May 2015, 01:22 PM

Replies: 10

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 894

Posted By diogoim

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Hi,

Awesome domain name and really good squeezepage, it's clear, simple and with a 2 step optin form integrated ;)

Nice job broo,

Cheers,

Diogo de Castro

Forum: Copywriting

22nd May 2015, 11:07 AM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By angiecolee

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Then I really hope you're thoroughly investigating the people advising you and the things they're advising you to do. If you keep making every single change people recommend to you, you're never...

Forum: Copywriting

22nd May 2015, 05:18 AM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By Sean DeSilva

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Hey Mike, I checked out your page and give you a few quick pointers here:

2015-05-22 18h16_42 - YouTube

Forum: Copywriting

21st May 2015, 12:43 PM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By angiecolee

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Mike - this is like the 4th or 5th (hell, I've lost track) time you've done this.

Stop making business decisions by committee (especially when you don't know who's advising you, what their own...

Forum: Copywriting

21st May 2015, 08:59 AM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By Ilenia Internet Marketer

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Hello Mike,
very interesting topic, congratulations !!!

You should change something:

- Remove the "Big Jim" because a natural level it is difficult to get that result;
- Include testimonials...

Forum: Copywriting

21st May 2015, 05:50 AM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By sethczerepak

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

1) Put your "As featured on" at the top, above your "Are You a Hard Gainer?"
2) Make your CTA button yellow or orange to make it stand out.
3) Take down that picture of the hairless silverback...

Forum: Copywriting

21st May 2015, 03:34 AM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By savidge4

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

I far more believe your post than I do your sales page.

You state you are not just selling the system.. its the system you used to almost double your mass. I want to see YOUR before and after...

Forum: Copywriting

21st May 2015, 01:05 AM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By GlenH

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Why don’t you set up a ’survey squeeze page’.

Let your visitors answer a few questions about what their biggest roadblock is to packing on solid muscle.

Then you send then customized...

Forum: Copywriting

20th May 2015, 12:13 PM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By MoChandler

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Third vote for sucky picture at the top. Most hard gainers don't want to look like Steroid Kings -- if they did, they'd just get steroids.

If you've already used the program, why not put your own...

Forum: Email Marketing

20th May 2015, 10:19 AM

Replies: 10

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 894

Posted By fulfilledlife

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Thank you :)

Forum: Email Marketing

19th May 2015, 01:50 PM

Replies: 10

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 894

Posted By TheHusnain

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

I have to say that you have some really good points there.

Forum: Email Marketing

19th May 2015, 01:39 PM

Replies: 10

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 894

Posted By fulfilledlife

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

From looking at your squeeze page I get the feeling you're not really sure about what is your market audience and what they want.

For example your headline "Are you a hard gainer?".
What does it...

Forum: Copywriting

19th May 2015, 12:25 PM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By DWaters

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

What is the attraction or benefit of the free repoet? I think you need some more incentive to get people to opt-in.

I do not like the picture. I find it unappealliing.

Those are my initial...

Forum: Copywriting

19th May 2015, 11:37 AM

Replies: 20

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 1,594

Posted By chillheart

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

1) The pic at the top-left... That's a pretty jarring disconnect from where they are now to where they (might?) want to be. A simple before-and-after would work better. Also, get rid of the website...

Forum: Email Marketing

18th May 2015, 12:05 PM

Replies: 10

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 894

Posted By TheHusnain

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

To be honest, if I was you, I wouldn't make the readers click on the button to open the form as it is the main part of your page. The main rule of a squeeze page is to keep it simple and make it...

Forum: Email Marketing

18th May 2015, 09:42 AM

Replies: 10

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 894

Posted By Michael S M

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

I like the way the page looks. Responsive too, which is more or less crucial these days in age. :)

However, I'm not too sure about the headline. You seem to target skinny guys and I'm not really...

Forum: Email Marketing

17th May 2015, 10:53 PM

Replies: 10

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 894

Posted By GforceSage

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

All caps is fine in this case since you are not writing much. There should not be a space in the middle of a sentence though. You have two lines, a space which breaks up a sentence and then two more...

Forum: Email Marketing

17th May 2015, 09:28 PM

Replies: 10

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 894

Posted By The IM Institute

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

I liked everything but all the CAPS up top. Too much?

Maybe about half as much.

Forum: Email Marketing

17th May 2015, 11:02 AM

Replies: 10

here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

Views: 894

Posted By Jonwebb

Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

I like personally. The head line is a little weak but you will know know unless you split test.

Start small like 20 a day for a week then start split testing different things

Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum

11th May 2015, 04:30 AM

Replies: 5

serious problem about leadpage

Views: 421

Posted By beiter

Re: serious problem about leadpage

How do you deliver the "bribe"?

Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum

10th May 2015, 12:44 AM

Replies: 5

serious problem about leadpage

Views: 421

Posted By fisomt

Re: serious problem about leadpage

Hey, Mike, What you have to do if you want to get rid of unconfirmed opt-ins is this...
1.You must turn off the confirmed opt-in button on your Auto-responder service.
2. Then you must go to your...

Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum

9th May 2015, 07:10 PM

Replies: 5

serious problem about leadpage

Views: 421

Posted By Jonathan Vodini

Re: serious problem about leadpage

mike just set up properly your optin form from your autoresponder, which one do you use?

Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum

9th May 2015, 05:36 PM

Replies: 5

serious problem about leadpage

Views: 421

Posted By DIABL0

Re: serious problem about leadpage

I have never used this, but saw they have an function where after a user subscribes a box pops up waits for them to confirm before they can move forward. So they would have to confirm before they...

Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum

9th May 2015, 05:04 PM

Replies: 5

serious problem about leadpage

Views: 421

Posted By SaRitaCustis

Re: serious problem about leadpage

Mike,

Set up your opt-in form so that visitors are redirected to a page that tells them to go to their email and click the confirmation link in order to get the report.

Set up your confirmation...

Forum: Email Marketing

28th April 2015, 06:09 AM

Replies: 4

am I doing it wrong ? horrible campaign=need your honest advice

Views: 830

Posted By Hossein Rafiee

Re: am I doing it wrong ? horrible campaign=need your honest advice

I can confidently say that more than 60% of the problem is caused by your landing page.
Here are my suggestions for you:

1. Make the headline short, precise, and distinctive. It all looks like a...

Forum: Email Marketing

26th April 2015, 11:29 AM

Replies: 4

am I doing it wrong ? horrible campaign=need your honest advice

Views: 830

Posted By fulfilledlife

Re: am I doing it wrong ? horrible campaign=need your honest advice

You've asked for a honest advice, so I'm not going to sugar coat.

Imho your lead page needs complete reworking.

I think the headline needs complete rewriting, it contains 3 offers that when...

Forum: Email Marketing

25th April 2015, 12:18 PM

Replies: 4

am I doing it wrong ? horrible campaign=need your honest advice

Views: 830

Posted By neeraga

Re: am I doing it wrong ? horrible campaign=need your honest advice

1 subscribers out of 197 clicks is really not a great start.

Results depends a lot upon the segment that you are targeting.

How are you targeting the people for fitness niche in India ?
...

Forum: Copywriting

11th April 2015, 06:53 AM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

Views: 1,460

Posted By Steve The Copywriter

Re: i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

Angie is being (as always) kind in her own inimitable style (could be called "tough love").

You can sig away for as many characters as you can squeeze in.

And it's always good to provide sound...

Forum: Copywriting

10th April 2015, 02:20 PM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

Views: 1,460

Posted By angiecolee

Re: i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

I haven't seen all of your posts. The ones I've seen typically include that line about your free copywriting training.

Promote with care. If you're providing value 98% and only promoting 2%, I'd...

Forum: Copywriting

10th April 2015, 12:57 PM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

Views: 1,460

Posted By ChrisNosal

Re: i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

It's not promotion. It's a recommendation I offered because I think the content is valuable to his situation and will help him.

Just like a Google search, they're looking for the solution to a...

Forum: Copywriting

10th April 2015, 12:04 PM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

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Posted By angiecolee

Re: i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

What's up with the constant self promo?

Forum: Copywriting

10th April 2015, 11:51 AM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

Views: 1,460

Posted By ChrisNosal

Re: i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

It's a great website! You can make it work, you just need to change what you say to make it stand out, and give people a reason to buy the moment they land on your page.

The problem is it just...

Forum: Copywriting

10th April 2015, 11:47 AM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

Views: 1,460

Posted By gjabiz

Mike, good for you for trying.

I want to thank you for shining light on what so many people have in common...

a total and complete lack of understanding about selling via copy coupled with mind blowing expectations.

I'm...

Forum: Copywriting

10th April 2015, 10:41 AM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

Views: 1,460

Posted By Tim R

Re: i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

The fact that you think you can get 10% conversions with this shows how unprepared you are to start spending money on traffic.

A 10% conversion rate from cold traffic is amazing and so many...

Forum: Copywriting

9th April 2015, 10:07 PM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

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Posted By srp0987

Re: i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

This letter could easily be improved simply by shortening the sentences. There are a lot of sentences tied together with "and" that could be independent, declarative sentences. IMO, wordiness in...

Forum: Copywriting

9th April 2015, 04:07 PM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

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Posted By chillheart

.....

Oh come on max5ty. I mean, he used three exclamation points in a row. Twice.

Doesn't that prove he's the real deal?

Forum: Copywriting

9th April 2015, 01:42 PM

Replies: 10

i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

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Posted By max5ty

Re: i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride

I'd be surprised if you get any sales...especially if you're targeting English speaking buyers.

Your letter drones on and on and I tried hard to follow it but my mind kept drifting off into other...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

17th November 2014, 06:06 PM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By svetod

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

Totally agree, the domain name sounds good though, but you have to put a lot of work in optimising your LP. The red and black colours are bad and almost hurt the eyes, so I don't doubt that nobody...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

17th November 2014, 12:03 AM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

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Posted By NeedBucksNow

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

You should probably put the pic of the products near the top of the page 2 as it was the only part I thought was kind of cool along with your result pictures.

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

17th November 2014, 12:00 AM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By NeedBucksNow

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

Had to check out the site & see what everybody was talking about. I totally agree with the above comment & should do something to fix this asap if you ever want to make any sales. I do like your...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

16th November 2014, 11:40 PM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By RandySalameh

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

Yeah, I suggest you optimize your website before sending more traffic to it....It almost hurt my eyes looking at it.
First impressions are everything and this is what I noticed that needs to change...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

16th November 2014, 05:11 PM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By agelmanager

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

I agree you need to simplify your site, make it a one page funnel. Easy for people to read and understand then you will have a higher optin. Make a fresh clean sales page you will get more sales.
...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

15th November 2014, 05:25 AM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By vdigitalm

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

Your sales depends on many factors like your web pages answers all the questions user may have for the product or service, The content of the website, Offers, Page load time, Your website design,...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

14th November 2014, 04:43 PM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By talfighel

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

I just saw your website and it made me leave right away. I wouldn't buy anything from your site either if I was an interested prospect.

That is a great review site but one should NEVER copy...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

14th November 2014, 10:39 AM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By solarwarrior

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

Seriously? Let's me show you a good review page.
Top 10 Best Web Hosting Services of 2014 (http://www.top10bestwebhostings.com/)

But hey guys, let's be fair here.

At least this lad is trying...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

14th November 2014, 09:03 AM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By Oziboomer

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

Sorry to be harsh....but...

Ouch...your site just hurts.

Even reviewing is hard because it makes you just want to get outta there.

There is a difference between a plain "ugly" sales letter...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

14th November 2014, 08:27 AM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By Vijaysingh

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

There is no any exact number of clicks which can drive you sales.

No one can garanty that how mnay clicks are required to achieve sales.

The number of clicks required to achieve sales depends...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

14th November 2014, 05:19 AM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By bymarcot

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

Your site s***s big time. It`s not a user friendly, huge amount of text, no good CTA and very bad design (wrong colors and bad template). Better start optimizing your site first, then start testing...

Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)

14th November 2014, 05:07 AM

Replies: 13

how much click do need to make sales ?

Views: 1,170

Posted By Daniel Thomas

Re: how much click do need to make sales ?

Man, first of all you should optimize the page. After seeing it, I didn't even wanted to read what's there. You need to make it user friendly, provide thrust elements, make it easier to read. The 1st...

Forum: Copywriting

10th November 2014, 03:32 AM

Replies: 8

i need your honest advice about my review site

Views: 1,337

Posted By stealthtargeting

Re: i need your honest advice about my review site

I have just visited your review site. It is about body building product review. I have found that it is a one page website. I think you should re-arrange your reviews. When you are going to write a...

Forum: Copywriting

10th November 2014, 12:32 AM

Replies: 8

i need your honest advice about my review site

Views: 1,337

Posted By itos

Re: i need your honest advice about my review site

Some quick tips:

1) Improve your site speed.

I did some quick tests using Pingdom and GTmetrix and it's really slow compared to the average load speed of sites.
...

Forum: Copywriting

9th November 2014, 11:50 PM

Replies: 8

i need your honest advice about my review site

Views: 1,337

Posted By Brandboyz

Re: i need your honest advice about my review site

There are 8 things you should improve.
1)Make a better meta description
2)Optimize your HTML for H1 and H2 headers
3)Check all images for ALT attribute
4)Improve internal linking
5)Add proper...

Forum: Copywriting

9th November 2014, 06:04 AM

Replies: 8

i need your honest advice about my review site

Views: 1,337

Posted By Work1099

Re: i need your honest advice about my review site

If you already know that your target market identifies with the idea of "training hard and living simple," then that domain name may be appropriate. But if you haven't uncovered that from detailed...

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