Forum: Copywriting 
25th January 2013, 03:10 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 617  Re: Suggestions for my Site?
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However you lost me with the solution stage. I don't want to mislead people, because no solution works so perfectly, and people know that.
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Hi Graig,
Yes, the "solution"...
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Forum: Copywriting
24th January 2013, 10:50 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 617 Re: Suggestions for my Site?
There's certainly no need to provoke your audience to anger in this situation. They'd be dealing enough with that on their own! You're not looking for ANGER. You're looking for EMPATHY.
It's more...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th January 2013, 10:31 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
some suggestions:
1. Video Testimonials
2. Don't use blue colour font.
3. Have the most interesting parts featured above the line
4. Use a proper Salespage. There are too many distractions using...
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Forum: Copywriting
24th January 2013, 02:59 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 617 Re: Suggestions for my Site?
Hi Craig,
Your copy is making me angry!
I'm joking, but as Mr Vogt and The Marketeer accurately pointed out, unfortunately it is bland, generic and vague.
You've got to fire up the emotions....
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Forum: Copywriting
24th January 2013, 02:31 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 617 Re: Suggestions for my Site?
I'm not sure how this sales page will improve your conversations.
But if you're looking to improve your conversions then there's certainly room for improvement.
Here are some suggestions:
1....
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Forum: Copywriting
24th January 2013, 01:56 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 617 Re: Suggestions for my Site?
Well, for starters, nothing really catches my eye about it right away. And I didn't even realize most of your sales copy wasn't visible until you scroll down a bit. Things like the benefits don't...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th January 2013, 09:43 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
Jeremy nailed a big issue, but left out some information. My reaction is that you are assuming that anyone visitong your page is already knows why they might want a program such as yours. You do...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 09:50 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
I agree with WikiWarrior - the box with your ecover really looks fantastic & perhaps they could add a header for you. Who knows, perhaps one of the copywriting junkies in the copywriting area of the...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 12:42 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
Just thinking out loud here. But I would assume (not knowing anything about this niche at all) that many of those in need of anger management counseling were probably "encouraged" to seek help from...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 12:19 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
I looked at the your website. It is good looking and professional. I do agree with other posters that it may be priced to high. Also, I think you need a good attention grabber at the start of...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 11:45 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
That box under the pages is really well done and the ebook cover is fantastic. I would get whoever designed that for you to create a header which at the moment is a wasted opportunity. As someone...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 07:56 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
Do you have a plugin for SEO? If not, try All In One SEO.
Look at your open rates for your mailing list. They may have not opt out but they may of put you in the spam folder. Anyone you see that...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 04:50 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
If I were you I would do the following one:
Break down the ebook into two or three parts.
Publish it on Kindle (obviously that way you cannot sell it on your website), for $0.99 as a start each...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 01:13 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
you should change your overall keywords. yes keep anger management but no one is searching for mindfulness anger management.
i think you should scrap the direct sales and make a content site....
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 01:04 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
Maybe you could fine-tune to a specific audience? Such as a specific circumstance where your ideal buyer goofed?
A few that come to mind:
Road Rage - work with police as a course for...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 12:30 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
I feel there are somethings that are strange.
You say you been working on this for about a year. You must of just put your site on Alexa ranking or you are doing something wrong.
You are at...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd January 2013, 12:00 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
Hi Craig,
First off, your site looks great - you did a really nice job. A couple of thoughts that came to my mind that you might consider testing would be:
1) Price may be too high? It seems...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd January 2013, 11:48 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
I personally would change the title. "Mindfulness" is a very long, drawn out, dull word.....Make it something short and catchy. That could make all the difference in the world.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd January 2013, 11:44 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
Its not a bad niche, I would suggest building a forum community with suggestions, questions and answers, Give Inside tips and then you can promote you e-book... perhaps even a youtube video might...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd January 2013, 11:43 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
Your sales copy (what there is of it) needs a re-tooling.
Big time. It has zero appeal.
You'll need to spend some time learning about copywriting (salesmanship-in-print.)
Or else get a...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd January 2013, 11:39 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
I took a look at your site and it pissed me off.
Okay, okay, cheap shot. :D But in all seriousness, I think that this is a hard niche to sell. You look like you're doing most things right, but...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd January 2013, 11:38 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 632 Re: Suggestions for my business?
One thing i can tell you straight away, is that someone with anger management problems isnt going to buy an ebook for $59. You should lower the price
You may also want to add a free live chat, so...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
1st January 2013, 12:49 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 565 Re: How to Structure my Landing Page?
I would definitely look at creating a "squeeze page" where you develop a high value giveaway in return for getting a subscriber...the reason being is that you can expect 1-3% conversion on your sales...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
1st January 2013, 12:39 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 565 Re: How to Structure my Landing Page?
I think that you should have both on the same page. What you can also do is to put at opt in box at the very top of your sales page where you can collect names and emails of people. That way, you can...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
1st January 2013, 07:16 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 565 Re: How to Structure my Landing Page?
I went to your website. As far as I can see people can buy your product from the home page which makes the second page kind of redundant.
The less clicks it would take for someone to purchase your...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th May 2011, 11:20 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,016 Re: Review My Sales Page?
Here are some notes, in no specific order:
1. You need to include your definition of "Mindfulness" near the beginning, I think most people only have a vague conception of what that term means and...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th May 2011, 08:06 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,016 Re: Review My Sales Page?
@craigmo - these are my initial impressions of your page:
-- It feels very neat and peaceful, almost lulling or calming
-- 1st paragraph lacks intimacy, has no warmth. Seems too concerned with...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th May 2011, 09:12 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,016 Re: Review My Sales Page?
I think what Ashley means is that the page speaks from your point of view, in terms you understand.
Somebody who needs your help faces issues, you have mentioned some of them.
However, you need...
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Forum: Website Design
28th April 2011, 02:32 PM
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Replies: 5
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Forum: Website Design
28th April 2011, 12:36 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,125  Re: Domain Key Word order: Importance?
Having keyword(s) in the domain name is important. Having the keyword(s) URL structure is even better.
I have seen a list on the level of importance that the major search engines use for...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd April 2011, 01:16 AM
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Replies: 4
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2011, 09:51 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 619 Re: Having a different site name and domain name
Yes, your domain name should also be reflected in you site name, not only for consistency but also for SEO purposes.
If you can't change your site name then go with the different names. However,...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2011, 07:44 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 619 Re: Having a different site name and domain name
I would rather go with my keyword in the domain name as well as keyword in the H1 header. This will improve the image of your site far better than just any name in the H1 header.
Hope this helps!
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2011, 04:25 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 513 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2011, 04:11 PM
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Views: 513 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2011, 04:11 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 513 Re: How to Create an Optin and autoresponder
You'll need to get an autor-responder account at like AWeber, iContact etc... You can try AWeber for the 1st month for $1. If you don't understand how to use them, there are plenty of tutorials on...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2011, 04:10 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 513 Re: How to Create an Optin and autoresponder
Feel free to use the search button... it has been discussed hundreds of times.
You need either an autoresponder (AR) service or an AR script.
Since you don't know anything about it, I wouldn't...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2011, 12:41 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 580 Re: Examples of Successful Sites
My design is plain and ugly, but it gets me people to opt-in to my list. I use 99% forum marketing to generate over 40+ leads per day.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2011, 12:07 AM
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Replies: 2
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
20th April 2011, 09:46 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 471 Re: Is this a valid strategy?
That is a great way to sell tons of product for yourself on Clickbank.
By having a content site and community you will get a lot of rankings in the search engines for hot terms the buyers in your...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
20th April 2011, 09:45 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 471 Re: Is this a valid strategy?
Sounds a good plan but provide some links from the ClickBank site to your main site and vice-versa at appropriate pages. The reason is to have the visitor spend more time in your sites.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
20th April 2011, 09:45 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 471 Re: Is this a valid strategy?
You said your product... is it yours or are you selling something as an affiliate?
Either way, in my opinion you don't really need to separate the two approaches... so your "community" on the one...
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Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You
13th April 2011, 07:54 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 563 Re: Seeking Internet Marketing Mentor
Craigmo, if you would like some help/direction I'd love to assist.
Here are a couple of success stories of mine. (So you know I'm not a weirdo. Ha!)
Happy Clients | Product Launch Marketing...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th February 2011, 01:30 PM
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Replies: 49
Views: 4,942 How do you protect your Download Page?
If you're selling an information product (eBook and/or package of videos) on ClickBank or with another shopping cart method, as I understand it the customer buys the product and then is redirected to...
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