Forum: Copywriting 
2nd June 2014, 10:46 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 1,439  Re: Scrivener workflow?
I use it. I think Colin Chung loves it...
The way I use it is a bit different but basically, one section on bullets, another on research, another on ideas and the final one is outline. I go back...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th March 2014, 06:22 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 608 |
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Forum: Copywriting
12th January 2014, 01:21 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,043 Re: Had much luck with this technique?
Check if you've received emails prior. They might have changed the page to keep up with the campaign (awareness) , or have some script going on for those who've clicked before.
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Forum: Copywriting
14th October 2013, 04:02 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 945 |
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Forum: Copywriting
1st October 2013, 07:24 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,079 Re: Help Me Improve My Sales Video Script :)
For what you say, the script looks good.
I think that you should maybe focus on some 'newer' content. A new type of solution or area of focus involving videos.
Depending on the prospects who...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th August 2013, 02:21 PM
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Replies: 34
Views: 2,530 |
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2013, 02:59 PM
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Replies: 48
Views: 1,460 Re: [HELP!] Critique my sales page PLEEEZE!
Anyways, now that my colleagues have given FANTASTIC critiques... let me offer a bit of advice...
Whats the ONE SPECIFIC problem you solve?
In your case, finding "The ONE" isn't specific.
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Forum: Copywriting
1st July 2013, 09:57 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 996 Re: What do you think of this letter?
The headline is for prospects who are sophisticated. And the Big Idea seems to attract those who already know whats up. People who understand their problem but only need a solution.
The Story is...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd June 2013, 02:38 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 2,004 Re: Advanced Copywriting...Lesson 1..."Proof"
I agree. But I tend to do it differently...
I try to say the proof first, then make the claim. Basically, setting them up to believe what I'm about to claim.
So in your example...
PROOF: Our...
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Forum: Copywriting
18th June 2013, 02:01 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,317 |
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Forum: Copywriting
5th June 2013, 06:00 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 886 Re: The Problem With Direct Response?
https://www.dropbox.com/s/0mdxcsjifutgxwh/DRH0512-RPLY_HadEnough_Tab-r.pdf
That's the "Head Enough"
And here's Jim Rutz - "Read This Or Die"...
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Forum: Copywriting
19th May 2013, 05:22 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 769 |
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Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2013, 05:04 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 917 |
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Forum: Copywriting
7th April 2013, 12:31 PM
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Replies: 30
Views: 1,717 |
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Forum: Copywriting
19th March 2013, 08:34 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 1,012 |
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Forum: Copywriting
16th March 2013, 12:38 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 847 Re: Research...What exactly are you researching?
Alex is on the dot...
I personally believe that research ALWAYS makes your copy.
I spend about 50% on researching, and the other half fixing everything up and connecting the pieces of "note...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th March 2013, 05:38 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,041 Re: Best Story/Copywriting Course?
Clayton Makepeace's Desk Top Copy Coach and Bencivengas 100 Seminar.
And if you want the BEST of the BEST, (imo) -Breakthrough Advertising by Eugene Schwartz
David
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Forum: Copywriting
7th March 2013, 12:52 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 578 |
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Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2013, 09:28 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 11,125 Re: Chris Haddad's Latest VSL...
Yes. I do this all the time.
I actually started doing this for a million dollar copywriter a long time ago.
Once I did 2 good ones he needed (one was the solar control) I started to understand...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th March 2013, 07:18 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 661 |
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd March 2013, 10:51 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 827 Re: I would love your feedback on my Copy
Your headline, subheadline and lead are all promises.
You need to squeeze in proof because peeps will immediately become skeptical by then and probably click off.
You could add those SS of your...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th February 2013, 05:33 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 967 |
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Forum: Copywriting
8th February 2013, 06:50 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 589 Re: What do you think of this writing?
I think he's telling it like it is. He isn't holding anything back. And that's exactly why I think it's impact-full.
This can tie into WHY copywriters need to research like theres no tomorrow....
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Forum: Copywriting
7th February 2013, 02:28 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,614 |
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd February 2013, 12:37 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 514 |
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Forum: Copywriting
31st January 2013, 06:49 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,200 Re: Hate on my Squeeze Page
So basically tighten up your copy, add more credibility as soon as you make a claim and for gods sake and for the life of Bruce, remove 1 arrow and make the other less spammy looking (smaller)...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st January 2013, 12:28 PM
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Replies: 41
Views: 4,280 Re: Clayton Makepeace does VSLs....
He did an hour on VSL's in AWAI 2012 bootcamp...
I couldn't go... but if you want a taste of what he'll tell you, purchase the home study 2012 bootcamp...
Its a few hundred bucks, I think...
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Forum: Copywriting
30th January 2013, 12:31 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 1,872 |
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Forum: Copywriting
25th January 2013, 05:59 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 830 Re: __________
The first main problem I notice is you don't have any proof.
Everyone can claim their the best marketer in the world, but what kind of results have you made? What have you done before?
The BEST...
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Forum: Copywriting
18th January 2013, 01:42 AM
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Replies: 184
Views: 13,884 Re: Is NLP Utter Hogwash?
I think you hit on a good point Sean...
And maybe that's what it all comes down to. I mean, look at how many info-products selling at 2k+ and seminars for 20k+, teach information anybody can get...
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Forum: Copywriting
16th January 2013, 10:26 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 571 |
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Forum: Copywriting
16th January 2013, 08:28 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,073 |
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Forum: Copywriting
14th January 2013, 04:47 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,536 Re: The $4,000 Suit
Thanks for the link Joe - a really good read...
Goes to show anybody could increase their bottom lines no matter the situation.
David
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Forum: Copywriting
12th January 2013, 03:40 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 870 Re: Critique Appreciated
I think most of your "learn how to" bullets are more features than they are benefits...and aren't that intriguing...
You need to realize that small business's ge SPAMMED the heck out of EVERY...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th January 2013, 10:12 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 715 Re: Your Video Has 2 Seconds...
Yeah, I was talking to Daniel yesterday about something similar this and it turns out that a headline, a POWERFUL headline can keep them engaged while they wait...
And of course, having an image...
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Forum: Copywriting
28th December 2012, 07:14 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 2,667 |
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Forum: Copywriting
8th December 2012, 06:39 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,432 Re: Couple Quick Questions For Copywriters
Hey Max... for what it's worth...
1. I don't think it matters because if top click bank products, and other publishers use it then I think there's a reason why... Mark nailed it.
2. I recently...
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Forum: Copywriting
1st December 2012, 02:46 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 786 |
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Forum: Copywriting
20th November 2012, 11:43 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 763 Re: Question about Profiling Donors
Hey Arfa, the first thing that comes to mind is a survey.
Maybe a small one to those who have already donated... check why they donated and what they'd like to see in order to keep funding.
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Forum: Copywriting
31st October 2012, 01:35 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,534 |
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Forum: Copywriting
25th October 2012, 12:25 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 793 Re: What makes a good WSO thread title?
I've pushed for 200% money back guarantee titles.
Most prospects pondering around the WSO section simply want to make money anyway possible. So I've found this to be a pretty good booster.
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd October 2012, 08:06 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 3,572 |
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Forum: Copywriting
17th October 2012, 04:00 PM
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Replies: 52
Views: 1,899 |
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Forum: Copywriting
13th October 2012, 03:03 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,014 Re: The "Secret" Marketing Strategy headline
Good Point Steve. Some people might have already seen too many of these headlines. Promises of beating up google and such...
And use a mechanism. Describe something unique about the way you get...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd October 2012, 02:26 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,249 |
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Forum: Copywriting
30th September 2012, 05:51 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 834 |
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Forum: Copywriting
26th September 2012, 12:14 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 952 |
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd September 2012, 09:52 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,372 Re: The Copywriting Apocalypse
I agree with you Steve, mainly on the Guarantee part...
They do think they'll get ripped off. And I don't blame them...a lot is on the line.
It's just soo funny when you show them your copy and...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd September 2012, 10:51 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 817 Re: Nikola Tesla saved by the written word...
I doubt it...
But I saw it as a good persuasive letter, selling Tesla on his greatness and then asking for donations...
You can see some copywriting in this. And his viewers are college peeps,...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
21st September 2012, 10:53 AM
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Replies: 47
Views: 5,350 |
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Forum: Copywriting
21st September 2012, 03:52 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 817 Nikola Tesla saved by the written word...
Matthew Inman used the fine art of Copywriting to make 1.2 million for a fundraiser.
His goal was 850k...
The thing is, he had to educate who Nikola Tesla was... then ask for donations to...
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Forum: Copywriting
18th September 2012, 05:42 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 952 |
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Forum: Copywriting
20th August 2012, 01:25 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 739 |
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Forum: Copywriting
18th August 2012, 03:03 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 655 Re: Fun Exercise Today
That's great then... I've been through a similar situation. Again - just a type of perspective...
Either way - can't wait to see what you finished with.
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Forum: Copywriting
11th August 2012, 07:25 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 1,933 Re: World's Best Copywriting Membership Site?
A website dissecting current winning promotion would be worth visiting.
Other than that... since most copywriting rules or w.e you call them have always been the same (obviously except medium) I...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th August 2012, 08:46 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 697 1898 Car Ad...
Check this out...
First Car Ad « Boomerss.com (http://www.boomerss.com/2012/08/06/first-car-ad/?goback=%2Egde_58585_member_142951137)
For some reason I read this ad in my head with a thick deep...
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