Forum: Copywriting
5th January 2013, 02:44 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 985 Re: can you help me "de-muddyfy" this copy?
Sehr gut Herr Doctor. Setzen.
[Very good doctor. Sit down].
This is not a sales copy, it is a research paper. Actually very good for a research paper but for a sales letter: way too complicated....
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Forum: Copywriting
5th January 2013, 12:14 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 985 Re: can you help me "de-muddyfy" this copy?
I would move the demo video right below the headline.
It looks like you have a good product, so I would just dive right in and show people how it works. This will get people hooked right away.
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Forum: Copywriting
4th January 2013, 06:11 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 985 Re: can you help me "de-muddyfy" this copy?
Veit, it looks like you're targeting experienced SEO practitioners. If so, no problem. If you're targeting the average webmaster I think a lot of that will go right over their head. I made that...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th January 2013, 05:06 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 985 Re: can you help me "de-muddyfy" this copy?
Attention Website Owners Hungry For Quality Traffic...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th January 2013, 01:00 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 985 Re: can you help me "de-muddyfy" this copy?
Veit, you're trying too hard to be "creative" with all the dinosaur talk upfront.
Add personality and spark, but not to where it takes away from "instant communication."
--- Ross
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Forum: Copywriting
4th January 2013, 08:32 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 985 Re: can you help me "de-muddyfy" this copy?
Yes, it does state what site owners already know.
And highlights problem after problem.
I know you're using the Problem, Agitate, Solution formula.
But I too would concentrate much more on...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th January 2013, 08:14 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 985 Re: can you help me "de-muddyfy" this copy?
You may not have much luck stopping readers by restating something everyone knows... Google is screwing website owners.
Your better hook may be more solution oriented, as that is what website...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
27th December 2012, 03:07 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 786 10 Business Lessons Learned in 2012
2012 was the best year of my life.
Business was incredible, I traveled for 6 months in Europe and met lots of amazing people.
Today I reflected on my business in 2012 and wanted to share with...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
10th November 2011, 12:37 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,015 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
10th November 2011, 12:36 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,015 |
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings
14th February 2011, 04:44 PM
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Replies: 143
Views: 35,435 Re: Google Sniper 2.0 New Release
And my eye goes down to your sig where you're promoting GS2 like crazy. As the swipe emails say -
"Brand new" - as in "recycled". Fail.
yeah...so limited that's why the Bl-ac-k h-at mob have...
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Forum: Search Engine Optimization
27th January 2011, 08:17 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 1,811 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
20th January 2011, 01:55 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 724 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
20th January 2011, 12:22 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 792 Smart Forum Marketing vs Begging for Clicks
People come to the Warrior Forum and the like to learn about IM. Some come just to have one or two specific questions answered. This is fine, because often times their questions spark an...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th January 2011, 02:07 AM
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Replies: 271
Views: 26,152 Re: Is Amazon Associates Program Worth it?
One thing I learnt very early on was this.
Don't simply put a text link in your article or review. What I mean is this:
If your articles reads
"The Acme Roadrunner WY-3dT model D is a great...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th January 2011, 12:30 AM
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Replies: 33
Views: 1,937 5 Things You Didn't Know About Pre-Selling
I subscribe to almost everything (for research purposes) and I usually check out what people sent out that day before I go to bed.
Today, I snoticed some common suckiness in today's crop. And...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th December 2010, 05:35 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 645 Re: Can someone help with "press release"
A press release is not from you to your customers, to convince them they should buy your product.
It is from you to the press, to convince them they should write about your product.
Your...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
27th December 2010, 09:14 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 953 |
Forum: Offline Marketing
19th November 2010, 10:41 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 2,545 Google Places - CRITICAL New Rule Changes
For those of you doing Places for clients, this info is mission critical.
I don't know the best way to share all the important info since I just wrote a 5 page blog post about it and there is so...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th November 2010, 09:26 AM
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Replies: 342
Views: 32,029 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
21st October 2010, 02:23 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 637 Re: how to "split-test" performance of blog-POST?
Veit,
fellow warrior Paul Hancox (http://www.warriorforum.com/members/paul-hancox.html) sells a split testing script called "Power Split Tester" for standard html pages. When I tried to split test...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
21st October 2010, 08:57 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 637 Re: how to "split-test" performance of blog-POST?
Veit, since you're using a sticky post to pin it in a repeatable position, you're left with two tasks, alternating the content and measuring the response.
Measuring the response is the easy part -...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
20th October 2010, 01:47 AM
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Replies: 76
Views: 4,700 |
Forum: Search Engine Optimization
20th September 2010, 04:34 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 536 You never know Googe's strategy...
My friend you never know Google's algorithm. I think you should wait as advised by others. You are building backlinks. It is ok, but which websites you are linking? Get backlinks from good PR (page...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
15th September 2010, 08:01 AM
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Replies: 98
Views: 4,724 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
15th September 2010, 05:28 AM
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Replies: 98
Views: 4,724 Re: Which WSO actually made you over $500/month?
Hm you bought 20 (!) WSO's and had the time to fully implement each of them?
..and you still couldn't get to $500 a month.
I'm not sure then if that's the fault of the WSO's anymore, you might...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
14th September 2010, 07:43 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 939 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
12th September 2010, 02:45 PM
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Replies: 81
Views: 3,402 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th September 2010, 01:50 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,581 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th September 2010, 01:43 PM
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Replies: 58
Views: 7,412 Local Lead Gen On Facebook - $5000 per month
I got 3-4 messages yesterday from my Facebook post from people interested in how I used to do local lead generation through Facebook.
This is going to be a very long and indepth post... But I'll...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th September 2010, 06:18 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,588 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th September 2010, 12:34 AM
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Replies: 41
Views: 2,298 Re: here's why the gurus make $$$ and you don't
Oh, I'm not in any way trying to put Veit down. I just think there's a pitfall in the idea of FOCUS being something you do once and then it's done. It's this ongoing thing, where you drill down, then...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th September 2010, 11:49 PM
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Replies: 41
Views: 2,298 Re: here's why the gurus make $$$ and you don't
A few months back Veit Schenk showed me some rather important psychological concepts that have essentially re-engineered my daily activities.
I am not about to split hairs here about what the...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th September 2010, 11:22 AM
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Replies: 118
Views: 16,726 How I make $300+ each day with Facebook...
I'm in a good mood today, so Im gonna lay out for you my "playbook" for making money with Facebook.
I basically lost about $3,000 testing on Facebook before I made this campaign profitable. Im...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th September 2010, 07:42 PM
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Replies: 97
Views: 5,726 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
4th September 2010, 08:09 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,082 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th June 2010, 09:57 AM
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Replies: 36
Views: 1,690 If I had to start again
Hi all.
I've been making my living online for the last three years and it has been sooooo hard. I've really, really struggled and if I started again this is what I'd do differently knowing what...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th June 2010, 07:22 AM
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Replies: 34
Views: 1,263 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th June 2010, 11:04 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 605 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th June 2010, 03:32 PM
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Replies: 34
Views: 1,263 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
21st May 2010, 11:43 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 699 |
Forum: Search Engine Optimization
16th May 2010, 12:25 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 3,229 |
Forum: Search Engine Optimization
15th May 2010, 05:03 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 3,229 Re: where to buy used domains (with good PR)
Go to anywhere you can buy domains for fixed price as you like (such as BuyDomains.com since others have mentioned it) and either use whatever export function they have or simply copy them straight...
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Forum: Search Engine Optimization
15th May 2010, 05:10 AM
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Replies: 44
Views: 3,229 Re: where to buy used domains (with good PR)
I can help you get good prices at Buydomains if you need. I've bought domains worth $xx,xxx from them and have access to better pricing than most people. PM or contact me through my site.
I will...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
25th April 2010, 04:38 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 985 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
15th April 2010, 09:18 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,754 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
15th April 2010, 08:47 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,754 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th March 2010, 03:09 PM
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Replies: 35
Views: 1,204 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th March 2010, 08:03 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 606 Re: script for 'test' or 'quiz' on webpage?
Veit, you have a couple of choices if you want to keep things simple. Most of the cut and paste form code you get should have something like this:
<input type=hidden name=list value=1>to identify...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
14th March 2010, 09:49 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 606 Re: script for 'test' or 'quiz' on webpage?
Eben Pagan released something like this for free during a launch a long time ago - I think it was called "Psychic Salesletter" or something similar. I'm not sure if it's still up anywhere. I have it...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
14th March 2010, 09:16 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 606 Re: script for 'test' or 'quiz' on webpage?
Veit, here's one way I've done it...
If you check most opt-in forms, you'll see they usually have a hidden variable to set a list ID. You can use your a, b, c choices to set that variable. When...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th March 2010, 01:57 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 785 |
Forum: Copywriting
12th March 2010, 01:55 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 785 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th March 2010, 04:12 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 642 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th March 2010, 09:29 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 808 Do Your Article Titles Suck?
Be honest and objective...do they?
I constantly test my article titles. I will write boring ones on purpose to see
how they perform against others.
Which one of these titles do you think got...
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